Grading and Feedback
-Highlight main terms/words/phrases/sentences in each paragraph
-Beginning
Probably a very strong paragraph if the beginning is highlighted.
-Highlight multiple elements in the paragraph
Create a bigger roof - make sure your beginning sentence in the paragraph includes everything you want to talk about.
Split the large paragraph into two smaller projects.

-Squiggle lines below unclear problematic content with a pencil
-Problem not described because he does not want to be prescriptive.

Text - Be careful about how you use the word because it could refer to one word or  many pages of words.